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Landing

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I like the lines on the top part of the ship, but I think you should make them a bit darker, closer to black. They look like they could be on the inside. Doing this might show some depth(detail) to it. Next, it would help if there were some more values added in areas, example, where the beings are, we can see reflected light, we should see some light bouncing of the ground and hitting the ships frame(pieces covering the bottom lit up area). That would give is more depth to. I do see some bouncing light to the back bottom areas, but I would try and make a highlighted line flowing down, then blend it to darkness. Kinda like you have on the top frame work, but blend it into the darkness. 3rd, I don't know what kinda planet this is, but It looks like it could be a rocky kinda place. Find some photo's of barren, rocky landscapes and use them for reference. I would like to see some huge and knee size boulders around. Hope this will be helpful, keep up the good work.